PARAPHRASING
All IELTS writing task 2 essay introduction paragraphs contain:
1. Background statement = a paraphrase of the essay question
2. Thesis statement = your position or main points
1) How long should the introduction be?
Most essays will require only two sentences for your introduction paragraph. You will need to write a background statement and a thesis statement. There is no need to write more. It won't help your score to add more to the introduction. Your introduction should usually be between 40-60 words. Below are details of the content of an introduction paragraph.
2) Background statement:
This is the first sentence of your essay and it paraphrases the essay question. This is the way to introduce the issue or issues given to you by IELTS because that is what your essay is responding to. Paraphrasing is a way to avoid copying directly from the essay question by using your own sentence. For example:
Essay Question 1
Science will soon result in people living to an average of 100 years or more. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Model Background Statement for IELTS:
1. People's lifespan is increasing due to developments in science and it is thought that people will soon have an average life expectancy of 100 years or longer.
2. Due to the development of science, people's life spans might be extended to 100 years or even longer.
3. People may one day live to be 100 years old or more owing to the development of science.
Essay Question 2
Some people prefer online classes, while others think it is better to be in a traditional classroom. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Model Background Statements:
1. While there are people who prefer to take part in online courses, others believe that traditional classroom teaching is by far superior.
2. Online course are very popular with some people, however others still consider teacher led classrooms as the most effective way to learn.
3. Although online courses are preferred by some people, there are others who firmly believe that learning should take place in a classroom face to face with a teacher.
Essay Question 3
Many people try to find a balance between their work and other aspects of their life. However, few actually achieve this. What solutions can you suggest?
Model Background Statements:
1. It is a common problem that people struggle to find a healthy balance between their work and other areas of their life.
2. Finding a balance between work and other areas of life can be a challenge that some people struggle with.
3. While many people wish for a healthy work-life balance, few are able to realise this.
Essay Question 4
There has been an increase in the number of children and youngsters committing crime. What are the reasons for this and punishments should they receive?
Model Background Statements:
1. The number of crimes involving children and adolescents has risen over recent years.
2. Children and teenagers appear to be involved in an increasing number of crimes.
3. It has been observed that juvenile crime is on the rise.
Essay Question 5
In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem
At present, vehicles have increased by many folds on roads across the globe and the problem of traffic congestion is looming large, specifically, in metro cities.
Essay Question 6
Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside.
It is often thought that people should live inside the cities instead of living on the outskirts of the city in order to solve the traffic and transportation problems.
Essay Question 7
The impact that the growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people travelling by air is to increase tax on flights.
Over the recent years, demand for flights has increased which is affecting the environment adversely and It is sometimes thought that the best method to solve this problem to surge the tax on flights.
Essay Question 8
Some people think that it should be compulsory for people to retake their driving test every 5 years.
It is often thought that retesting of driving skills after every five years ought to be mandatory.
Essay Question 9
Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways do to this.
While a few people believe that a day without cars across the world is a helpful way to increase the air quality, others are of the opinion that we should adopt other ways to preserve our environment and reduce air pollution.
Essay Question 10
One way to solve the problem of congestion on the roads is to increase the tax on private vehicles.
Escalating the tax on personal vehicles will make them unaffordable and thus reduce the number of vehicles and traffic congestion on the roads.
Essay Question 11
Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution.
While many people believe that prohibiting automobiles from entering large cities is the appropriate measure to tackle the congestion issue, others disagree with this idealism.
Essay Question 12
Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution.
While many people believe that prohibiting automobiles from entering large cities is the appropriate measure to tackle the congestion issue, others disagree with this idealism.
Essay Question 13
A poor infrastructure hinders under-developed countries from progressing and modernizing. Some people think that this should be the first problem tackled by foreign aid.
Most developing countries fail to grow beyond a certain level because of the lack of adequate infrastructure. Hence, some people argue that foreign assistance should be primarily used to tackle this problem.
Essay Question 14
One way to solve the problem of congestion in cities is to build sky trains which run overhead rather than on or under the ground.
It is often thought that building sky trains is a better way to solve traffic problems in cities than building ground railways or underground tube.
Essay Question 15
In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
It is true that shopping malls have had a profound impact on the business of small shops and as a result of this, many local vendors have closed their shops.
Tips for IELTS Background Statements
1. Don't write a very long background statement. It doesn't help your score to do that and wastes valuable time.
2. Try to write your background statement as one complex sentence, to do that, use a clause and correct linking.
3. Don't paraphrase unless you are 100% sure your word is perfect. Not all words can be changed in English. Be selective when you paraphrase. Paraphrasing is a skill about when to change something and also when NOT
to change something.
4. Don't aim to impress - aim for accuracy instead.
5. You don't always need to start your background with "some people..". See all the options above.
6. You should not start your essay with overused expressions that are popular with low level English users, such as "In the modern era," or "With the advent of modern technology."
7. Avoid learning expressions which you think will impress the examiner "A hot debate.." / "a burning question.." "a highly controversial issue..". The examiner is trained to spot these learned expressions. They don't help your
Score and show a lack if individuality in your language. You need to write each sentence in your own words, unique to yourself